Help with Sales via contact form

the seo training i paid for has me contacting people to do their seo through emails i prospect,
when i email them that ill send them screen shots, the are asking for the screnshots and not replying where i am offering to fix some of the stuff for free (with upsale to paid services)

how do i get them to respond and let me start working on their site?

heres some sales looms i recorded
https://www.loom.com/share/8474dfd044bb42ef8adc04f213e9c45b
https://www.loom.com/share/4c8a67b4cbd5499a8f9b5eb36bac90cd
https://www.loom.com/share/31762440eba443a1bb926047adc1ece3
https://www.loom.com/share/6e7e222124f6429593c1c2079057616a
https://www.loom.com/share/21de10b5f6234a0db8da0fa7b898939b
https://www.loom.com/share/cec45e0a264e4eaf96601a9025a79fc3